Lucas @ Elm Park School
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Tuesday, 25 November 2014
Friday, 24 October 2014
Positive Social Interaction Award
I got the Positive Social Interaction Award for using the school values
and showing a positive attitude.
Thursday, 25 September 2014
Wednesday, 24 September 2014
Peace Sense Poem.
I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.
I am so proud of being able to make my work more colourful and vivid.
It can be tricky to describe the senses.
The thesaurus can help me by giving me interesting words to use.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a more interesting poem.
Ukulele
We have been learning to play the Ukelele with Mrs Talijaard.
Tuesday, 23 September 2014
The Worst Thing Ever.
The Worst Thing Ever.
It was 2:30 am on the 25th of April 1915.We were under the cover of darkness.
I was petrified. I had not just butterflies in my stomach
I also was sweating like an endless waterfall.
I was crammed in the landing boat.
It was dead silent. I was very nervous. I didn’t know if I was going to live or not.
I saw a big light coming from behind me.
It lit up like every where. I could now see everything around me.I heard a bullet going straight beside my ear. Lots of soldiers were dying all around me. Killed by the constant bullets being shot at us. Soldiers were falling out of the boat and sinking fast like the Titanic.
I felt a sharp pain in my shoulder. I thought I was about to die. It was the the worst thing ever….
By Lucas
I am learning to write an interesting recount.
I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.
It can be tricky to write in past tense.
The thesaurus can help me by giving me better words.
The next step for me in my learning is to find an interesting topic for me to write about.
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